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Hannah Spurling Journalism 
June 29, 2017 at 2:47 pm
The article is well developed and structured and in passage expertly written. There are a few words choices and spelling issues, and contextual issues e.g. lower classes, but this does not detract too much from the overall quality of the writing. It needs to be more consistent as you move forward, eradicating the minor errors.
The research undertaken is demonstrated clearly in the piece and your enthusiasm for the subject shines through the entire project.
The masthead needs some developing – but does show potential.
The main pages and contents page are underdeveloped – you need to look at other influential magazines to improve.
The typography is not contemporary enough – feels too old fashioned – again some influence of other designers needed here
Photographs lack the requisite market requirements – layout/typography not engaging enough for young target audience
There is not consistent design all the way through.
The project on the whole is outstanding: each chapter well-realised and articulated to a very high standard.
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